Thursday, December 16, 2010

Wish


That feeds a heart,
At loss of a stronger beat.

That humbles a life,
Grander than its planted seed.

That unveils the passion,
Behind all blinding truth.


Janete Cabral Copyright 2003-2010

4 comments:

Steve said...

I think it does none of us any harm to wish for the stars...

Janete Cabral said...

Absolutely !

Etienne's Journal said...

That was beautiful. Being an aspiring writer myself, I am often critical about other's poetry or works, but the only thing that that poem oozes is beauty. And I do have a little bit of a sneaky tendency to wish on the stars myself ;) I love all of your posts and I wish you the very best. Will you follow my blog? I know I am young, but my writing is advanced, and I really want to get some word around. My blog is: http://etiennesjournal.blogspot.com/ Thank you :) Love, Etienne
P.S, please keep posting more poetry, it is really lovely.

Janete Cabral said...

Etienne

Thank you for all your lovely comments. Writing is my passion and I love meeting fellow writers and poets so of course I will check your site. I am intrigued now!

keep in touch!

Janete